2026 年哈尔滨工程大学英语综合考研真题样题
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一、词汇与阅读理解(Part I Vocabulary and Comprehension,38%)
(一)选词填空(Directions 1-7)
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Because of the ___ of acupuncture therapy in China, Western physicians are starting to learn the procedure.
- 答案:(D) effectiveness
- 解析:句意为 “由于针灸疗法在中国的___,西方医生开始学习这一疗法”。选项需体现针灸的 “优势” 以促使西方医生学习:A. veracity(真实性,侧重 “是否真实”,而非 “效果”);B. manipulation(操作,与 “促使学习” 无直接逻辑);C. liquidity(流动性,不搭配 “疗法”);D. effectiveness(有效性,符合 “因效果好被学习” 的逻辑);E. inflation(膨胀,语义无关)。故选择 D。
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The conclusion of the program was a modern symphony with chords so ___ that it produced sound similar to the ___ of horns as the individual orchestra members tune their instruments before a concert.
- 答案:(E) discordant..cacophony
- 解析:第一空描述交响乐和弦的特点,第二空对应 “乐手调音时号角的声音”(通常不和谐):A. superfluous(多余的)..melody(旋律,调音非旋律);B. pretentious(自命不凡的)..clarity(清晰,调音不清晰);C. melodious(悦耳的)..applause(掌声,与调音无关);D. versatile(多才多艺的)..harmony(和谐,调音不和谐);E. discordant(不和谐的)..cacophony(嘈杂声,符合 “调音时的不和谐声”)。故选择 E。
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Black comedy is the combination of that which is humorous with that which would seem ___ to humor: the ___.
- 答案:(E) antithetical..macabre
- 解析:句意为 “黑色喜剧结合了幽默元素与看似与幽默___的元素:即___”。第一空需体现 “对立”,第二空需对应黑色喜剧的 “黑暗特质”:A. aptnetic(无此词,应为 apathetic,冷漠的)..ignoble(卑鄙的,不贴合);B. heretical(异端的)..arious(无此词,应为 various,多样的,语义无关);C. inferior(低劣的)..grandiose(宏伟的,矛盾);D. extraneous(无关的)..innocuous(无害的,不贴合黑色喜剧);E. antithetical(对立的)..macabre(恐怖的,符合黑色喜剧 “幽默与恐怖结合” 的特点)。故选择 E。
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The president’s speech was on a tiny number of issues since the president responded with ___ rather than clarity and precision.
- 答案:(E) obfuscation..vagueness
- 解析:句意为 “总统演讲仅涉及少量议题,因为他的回应是___而非清晰精准”。空格需与 “clarity and precision”(清晰精准)形成反义:A. sincerity(真诚)..humor(幽默,均非反义);B. innuendo(暗示)..candor(坦率,矛盾);C. fervor(热情)..fluidity(流畅,均非反义);D. animation(活力)..formality(正式,均非反义);E. obfuscation(模糊)..vagueness(含糊,均为 “清晰” 的反义,符合逻辑)。故选择 E。
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It is difficult to make modern audiences, accustomed to the ___ of film and television, to appreciate opera with its grand spectacle and ___ gestures.
- 答案:(C) minutiae..extravagant
- 解析:第一空体现影视的特点,第二空体现歌剧的 “宏大场景与___动作”,二者形成对比:A. irreverence(不尊重)..helpless(无助的,不搭配动作);B. sophistication(复杂)..monotonous(单调的,与 “宏大” 矛盾);C. minutiae(细节,影视注重细节)..extravagant(夸张的,歌剧动作夸张,符合对比);D. plurality(多样)..subtle(微妙的,与 “宏大” 矛盾);E. flamboyance(浮夸)..fine(精细的,矛盾)。故选择 C。
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The sonatas of Beethoven represent the ___ of classicism, but they also contain the seed of its destruction: romanticism, which ___ the sonata form by allowing emotion rather than tradition to shape the music.
- 答案:(B) pinnacle..shatters
- 解析:第一空体现贝多芬奏鸣曲对古典主义的 “巅峰” 意义,第二空体现浪漫主义对奏鸣曲形式的 “破坏”:A. denigration(贬低)..perpetuates(延续,矛盾);B. pinnacle(巅峰)..shatters(打破,符合 “古典主义巅峰与浪漫主义破坏” 的逻辑);C. plethora(过多)..heightens(提升,矛盾);D. fruition(实现)..restores(恢复,矛盾);E. ignorance(无知)..encumbers(阻碍,语义无关)。故选择 B。
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Behaviorism was a protest against the psychological tradition which held that the proper data of psychology were ___ which reflected one's consciousness or state of mind.
- 答案:(E) orthodox..mentalistic
- 解析:句意为 “行为主义反对认为心理学应研究___(反映意识或心理状态)的传统心理学”。第一空体现传统的 “正统性”,第二空体现 “心理相关”:A. reducible(可简化的)..superficial(表面的,不贴合);B. moralistic(道德的)..irrelevant(无关的,矛盾);C. rudimentary(基础的)..material(物质的,与 “心理” 反义);D. newfangled(新奇的)..perceptual(感知的,不贴合 “传统”);E. orthodox(正统的,传统心理学是正统的)..mentalistic(心理主义的,符合 “反映意识” 的特点)。故选择 E。
(二)类比推理(Directions 8-16)
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SINGER: CHORUS ::
- 答案:(E) actor: cast
- 解析:“歌手(个体)是合唱团(集体)的组成部分”,对应 “演员(个体)是剧组(集体)的组成部分”:A. architect(建筑师): blueprint(蓝图,创作者与作品);B. teacher(教师): student(学生,师生关系);C. author(作者): publisher(出版商,合作关系);D. driver(司机): highway(公路,使用者与场地);E. actor(演员): cast(剧组,个体与集体)。故选择 E。
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INCISION: SCALPEL ::
- 答案:(E) cut: saw
- 解析:“切口(动作结果)由手术刀(工具)产生”,对应 “切割(动作结果)由锯子(工具)产生”:A. hospital(医院): patient(病人,场所与对象);B. playground(操场): swing(秋千,场所与设施);C. kitchen(厨房): knife(刀,场所与工具,无动作结果);D. electricity(电): wire(电线,载体与工具);E. cut(切割,结果): saw(锯子,工具)。故选择 E。
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ALTIMETER: HEIGHT ::
- 答案:(A) speedometer: velocity
- 解析:“高度计(工具)测量高度(对象)”,对应 “速度计(工具)测量速度(对象)”:A. speedometer(速度计): velocity(速度,工具与测量对象);B. observatory(天文台): constellation(星座,场所与观察对象);C. race track(赛道): furlong(弗隆,长度单位,场所与单位);D. vessel(船): knots(节,速度单位,载体与单位);E. metronome(节拍器): tempo(节奏,工具与辅助对象,非直接测量)。故选择 A。
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CARAVAN: PROCESSION ::
- 答案:(B) wedding: ceremony
- 解析:“商队(具体)是行进队伍(泛指)的一种”,对应 “婚礼(具体)是仪式(泛指)的一种”:A. merchant(商人): commerce(商业,从业者与行业);B. wedding(婚礼): ceremony(仪式,具体与泛指);C. menagerie(动物园): animal(动物,场所与对象);D. hunter(猎人): prey(猎物,捕食者与对象);E. forum(论坛): argument(争论,场所与活动)。故选择 B。
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SLANDER: PEJORATIVE ::
- 答案:(C) extol: laudatory
- 解析:“诽谤(动作,贬义)具有贬损的(形容词)性质”,对应 “赞美(动作,褒义)具有赞美的(形容词)性质”:A. ingratiate(讨好): miraculous(奇迹的,无关);B. revere(崇敬): condemnatory(谴责的,反义);C. extol(赞美): laudatory(赞美的,动作与性质匹配);D. ruminate(沉思): unexpected(意外的,无关);E. inculcate(灌输): plaintive(悲伤的,无关)。故选择 C。
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UNGAINLY: ELEGANCE ::
- 答案:(E) perfunctory: attention
- 解析:“笨拙的(形容词)缺乏优雅(名词)”,对应 “敷衍的(形容词)缺乏关注(名词)”:A. stately(庄严的): majesty(威严,具备关系);B. suitable(合适的): propriety(恰当,具备关系);C. vacuous(空洞的): temerity(鲁莽,无关);D. feckless(不负责任的): sobriety(清醒,无关);E. perfunctory(敷衍的): attention(关注,缺乏关系)。故选择 E。
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CONSERVATOR: WASTE ::
- 答案:(D) chaperon: transgression
- 解析:“保护者(角色)防止浪费(行为)”,对应 “监护人(角色)防止越轨(行为)”:A. sentinel(哨兵): vigilance(警惕,具备关系);B. monarch(君主): subject(臣民,统治与被统治);C. demagogue(煽动者): benevolence(仁慈,反义);D. chaperon(监护人): transgression(越轨,防止关系);E. minister(大臣): profanity(亵渎,无关)。故选择 D。
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POLEMICIST: CONTROVERSY ::
- 答案:(B) visionary: dream
- 解析:“辩论家(角色)擅长辩论(活动)”,对应 “空想家(角色)擅长空想(活动)”:A. dilettante(业余爱好者): virtuosity(精湛技艺,反义);B. visionary(空想家): dream(空想,角色与活动);C. pundit(专家): sophistry(诡辩,反义);D. zealot(狂热者): benevolence(仁慈,无关);E. bigot(偏执者): equanimity(平静,反义)。故选择 B。
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PROSELYTIZE: CONVERT ::
- 答案:(A) argue: persuade
- 解析:“劝诱改宗(动作)的目的是使皈依(结果)”,对应 “争论(动作)的目的是说服(结果)”:A. argue(争论): persuade(说服,动作与目的);B. digress(离题): distract(分心,结果非目的);C. abide(忍受): forego(放弃,无关);D. delect(喜爱): condone(宽恕,无关);E. dissemble(伪装): abet(教唆,无关)。故选择 A。
(三)篇章阅读(Directions 17-38)
Passage 1(经济福利指数相关)
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The author's primary concern is to
- 答案:(D) show defects in a proposal
- 解析:文章开篇提及 “构建单一福利指数” 的提议,随后从 “实际成本测量、需求变化、环境因素、收入分配” 等方面分析该提议的缺陷(如权重设定主观、数据不足),核心是 “指出提议的问题”,而非支持或反驳某立场,故选择 D。
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The author implies that man-hours is not an appropriate measure of real cost because it
- 答案:(A) ignores the conditions under which the output is generated
- 解析:原文提到 “工时测量未考虑工作条件(如女性加班与男性加班的负担差异、工作环境)”,A 选项 “忽视产出产生的条件” 符合;B(环境成本)、C(实物与服务对比)、D(预测失业)、E(非福利测量)均非原文提及的原因,故选择 A。
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It can be inferred from the passage that the most important reason a single index of welfare cannot be designed is
- 答案:(C) any weighing of various measures into a general index would be inherently subjective and arbitrary
- 解析:原文明确 “将犯罪、污染等指标加权整合时,除个人偏好外无客观依据”,且 “无权重体系整合产出、成本、需求等指数”,C 选项 “加权具有主观性” 是核心原因;A(成本过高)、B(实证研究不足)、D(数据滞后)、E(数据缺失)均为次要问题,故选择 C。
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The author regards the idea of a general index of welfare as
- 答案:(A) an unrealistic dream
- 解析:文章详细分析构建单一福利指数的多重缺陷(数据不足、权重主观、需求难测),暗示该想法 “不现实”;B(科学现实)、C(重要贡献)、D(未来必需)、E(理想变革)均与作者否定态度不符,故选择 A。
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According to the passage, the GNP is
- 答案:(A) a fairly accurate measure of output
- 解析:原文明确 “GNP 能较好地测量产出(GNP measures output fairly well)”,A 选项符合;B(需求估计)、C(福利预测)、D(福利测量)均为原文否定的内容(GNP 不用于测量需求或福利),故选择 A。
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According to the passage, an adequate measure of need must take into account all of the following EXCEPT
- 答案:(E) accessibility of park land and other amenities
- 解析:原文提及需求测量需考虑 “人口变化(A)、天气影响(B)、城乡需求差异(C)、国防需求变化(D)”,E 选项 “公园可达性” 属于 “环境测量” 范畴,非 “需求测量” 内容,故选择 E。
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The passage is most likely
- 答案:(B) a chapter in a general introduction to statistics
- 解析:文章围绕 “经济福利指数的构建与缺陷” 展开,涉及数据测量、指数设计等统计相关内容,适合作为 “统计学入门书籍的章节”;A(公共政策演讲)、C(扶贫手册)、D(政府预算引言)、E(校长演讲)均与主题不符,故选择 B。
Passage 2(大学教育与知识应用相关)
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The author suggests that the university's greatest shortcoming is its failure to
- 答案:(D) help students see the relevance of the humanities to real problems
- 解析:原文指出 “大学在应用知识上失败,尤其是人文科学未被应用(almost never are the humanities well applied)”,即未帮助学生理解人文与现实问题的关联;A(平等机会)、B(开设人文课程)、C(职业准备)、E(必修人文课)均非原文强调的 “应用缺陷”,故选择 D。
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It can be inferred that the author presupposes that the reader will regard a course in literature as a course
- 答案:(A) with little or no practical value
- 解析:作者批判大学未应用人文科学(如文学),暗示读者可能默认 “文学课程无实用价值”,需作者强调其应用意义;B(仅学者感兴趣)、C(毕业必修)、D(与核心问题相关)、E(教写作)均与作者 “批判人文未被应用” 的前提不符,故选择 A。
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Which of the following questions would the author most likely consider a primary question?
- 答案:(E) What measures should be taken to solve the problem of world hunger?
- 解析:原文定义 “核心问题(primary problem)是长期存在、未被解决的问题”,E 选项 “解决世界饥饿” 是长期存在的全球性问题,符合;A(社保提额)、B(死刑合理性)、C(总统候选人)、D(胎儿存活月份)均为短期或具体问题,非 “长期核心问题”,故选择 E。
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The development discussed in the passage springs primarily from a problem of
- 答案:(B) educational philosophy
- 解析:文章围绕 “大学教育应如何应用知识(尤其是人文科学)” 展开,属于 “教育理念” 问题;A(政治哲学)、C(科学哲学)、D(应用科学)、E(实用政治)均非核心,故选择 B。
反义词(Directions 28-38)
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INCIPIENT(初期的,开始的)
- 答案:(A) completed(完成的)
- 解析:incipient 强调 “刚开始”,反义词为 “已完成”,A 选项符合;B(严重的)、C(不透明的)、D(卓越的)、E(无效的)均无反义关系。
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SANCTIFY(神圣化,使圣洁)
- 答案:(D) defile(玷污,亵渎)
- 解析:sanctify 侧重 “赋予神圣性”,反义词为 “破坏神圣性”,D 选项符合;A(投降)、B(放大)、C(切断)、E(预示)均无反义关系。
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DISSIPATE(消散,分散)
- 答案:(E) gather(聚集)
- 解析:dissipate 强调 “分散开来”,反义词为 “聚集”,E 选项符合;A(放弃)、B(受益)、C(追求)、D(倾诉)均无反义关系。
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PARSIMONY(吝啬,节俭过度)
- 答案:(D) generosity(慷慨)
- 解析:parsimony 侧重 “过度节俭,不愿花钱”,反义词为 “慷慨”,D 选项符合;A(违禁品)、B(秘密)、C(迟钝)、E(落叶)均无反义关系。
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ASPERITY(粗糙,严厉)
- 答案:(A) smoothness(光滑,温和)
- 解析:asperity 可指 “表面粗糙” 或 “态度严厉”,反义词为 “光滑” 或 “温和”,A 选项符合;B(捏造)、C(欺骗)、D(懒惰)、E(调解)均无反义关系。
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IGNOMINIOUS(可耻的,不光彩的)
- 答案:(D) honorable(光荣的,可敬的)
- 解析:ignominious 强调 “丢脸的”,反义词为 “光荣的”,D 选项符合;A(忧郁的)、B(脾气坏的)、C(对称的)、E(灾难的)均无反义关系。
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EVANESCENT(短暂的,易逝的)
- 答案:(C) permanent(永久的)
- 解析:evanescent 侧重 “存在时间短”,反义词为 “永久的”,C 选项符合;A(纵容的)、B(谄媚的)、D(无限的)、E(偶然的)均无反义关系。
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VILIFY(诽谤,诋毁)
- 答案:(E) laud(赞美,称赞)
- 解析:vilify 强调 “说坏话”,反义词为 “说好话”,E 选项符合;A(阻碍)、B(声称)、C(丰富)、D(限制)均无反义关系。
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TENDER(提出,提供;嫩的)
- 答案:(C) retract(撤回,收回)
- 解析:tender 作动词时表示 “提出(建议、报价)”,反义词为 “撤回”,C 选项符合;A(降级)、B(截断)、D(解放)、E(围攻)均无反义关系。
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FUNGIBLE(可替代的,可互换的)
- 答案:(C) unique(独特的,不可替代的)
- 解析:fungible 强调 “可被同类替代”,反义词为 “不可替代”,C 选项符合;A(腐蚀性的)、B(彩虹色的)、D(倒退的)、E(散漫的)均无反义关系。
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SPLENETIC(暴躁的,易怒的)
- 答案:(C) complacent(自满的,平和的)
- 解析:splenetic 侧重 “脾气坏、易发火”,反义词为 “情绪平和”,C 选项符合;A(沉默的)、B(神秘的)、D(懊悔的)、E(淘气的)均无反义关系。
二、翻译(Part II Translation,32%)
(一)汉译英(SECTION A: CHINESE TO ENGLISH)
原文
1992 年 3 月,联合国决定第四次世界妇女大会于 1995 年在中国首都北京召开,这使中国妇女的状况备受世界关注。
新中国宣告了中国妇女在政治、经济、文化、社会和家庭生活等各方面均享有与男子平等的权利,她们和全体中国公民一样成为国家与社会的主人。中国的各种法律保障妇女与男子具有同等的权利和地位,具有同等人格和尊严。中国政府运用法律的、行政的和教育的手段消除对妇女的各种歧视,保护妇女的特殊权益。今天,中国妇女已享有中国社会几千年来从未达到、许多发达国家历时数百年后才得到承认的平等权利。
参考译文
In March 1992, the United Nations decided that the Fourth World Conference on Women would be held in Beijing, the capital of China, in 1995, which drew worldwide attention to the status of Chinese women.
The People's Republic of China proclaimed that Chinese women enjoy equal rights with men in all aspects, including politics, economy, culture, society and family life, and that they, like all Chinese citizens, are masters of the country and society. Various laws in China guarantee that women have the same rights, status, personality and dignity as men. The Chinese government has adopted legal, administrative and educational measures to eliminate all forms of discrimination against women and protect their special rights and interests. Today, Chinese women enjoy equal rights that have never been achieved in China's thousands of years of history and that many developed countries only recognized after centuries of development.
解析
- 专有名词准确:“第四次世界妇女大会” 译为 “the Fourth World Conference on Women”(联合国官方名称),“新中国” 译为 “The People's Republic of China”(避免歧义)。
- 句式拆分与连贯:原文长句拆分为英文短句,用 “which”“and that” 等连接,保证逻辑连贯(如 “这使...” 译为 “which drew...”,符合英文定语从句用法)。
- 语义完整:“同等人格和尊严” 译为 “the same personality and dignity”,“特殊权益” 译为 “special rights and interests”,无语义增减;“中国社会几千年来从未达到” 译为 “have never been achieved in China's thousands of years of history”,准确传达时间范围。
- 文化适配:“国家与社会的主人” 译为 “masters of the country and society”,符合英文政治文本表达习惯,避免直译导致的生硬。
(二)英译汉(SECTION B: ENGLISH TO CHINESE)
原文
Albert Einstein, whose theories on space, time and matter helped unravel the secrets of the atom and of the universe, was chosen "Person of the Century" by Time magazine on Sunday.
Einstein was born in Ulm, Germany in 1879.
"My life is a simple thing that would interest no one. It is a known fact that I was born and that is all that is necessary," Einstein once modestly said.
In his early years, Einstein did not show the promise of what he was to become. He was slow to learn to speak and did not do well in elementary school. He could not stomach organized learning and loathed taking exams.
In 1905, however, he was to publish a theory which stands as one of the most intricate examples of human imagination in history.
In his "Special Theory of Relativity," Einstein described how the only constant in the universe is the speed of light. Everything else—mass, weight, space, even time itself—is a variable. And he offered the world his now-famous equation: energy equals mass times the speed of light squared (E=mc²).
His "Theory of Relativity" had a profound and startling influence on society and culture.
"Indirectly, relativity paved the way for a new relativism in morality, art and politics," Time wrote in an essay explaining its choice. "There was less faith in absolutes, not only of time and space but also of morality."
Einstein's famous equation was also the seed that led to the development of atomic energy and weapons.
Einstein earned the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1921 for his work.
参考译文
阿尔伯特・爱因斯坦因其关于时空与物质的理论揭开了原子与宇宙的奥秘,于周日被《时代》杂志评选为 “世纪人物”。
爱因斯坦于 1879 年出生在德国乌尔姆市。
“我的人生十分平凡,不会引起任何人的兴趣。众所周知,我只是来到了这个世界,这就够了。” 爱因斯坦曾谦逊地表示。
早年的爱因斯坦并未展现出日后的天赋。他学说话较晚,小学成绩也不理想。他无法忍受刻板的学习模式,也厌恶参加考试。
然而在 1905 年,他发表了一项理论,该理论成为人类历史上最精妙的想象力成果之一。
在《狭义相对论》中,爱因斯坦提出,宇宙中唯一恒定不变的是光速。其他所有事物 —— 质量、重量、空间,甚至时间本身 —— 都是变量。他还向世界提出了如今广为人知的方程式:能量等于质量乘以光速的平方(E=mc²)。
他的《相对论》对社会与文化产生了深远且惊人的影响。
《时代》杂志在一篇解释其评选理由的文章中写道:“相对论间接为道德、艺术与政治领域的新相对主义奠定了基础。人们对绝对真理的信仰有所减弱,这种绝对不仅体现在时间与空间上,也体现在道德层面。”
爱因斯坦这一著名方程式也为原子能与核武器的发展埋下了种子。
1921 年,爱因斯坦凭借其研究成果获得诺贝尔物理学奖。
解析
- 人名与专有名词:“Albert Einstein” 译为 “阿尔伯特・爱因斯坦”(标准译名),“Special Theory of Relativity” 译为 “《狭义相对论》”(物理学标准术语),“Time magazine” 译为 “《时代》杂志”(刊物标准译名)。
- 句式灵活转换:英文定语从句(如 “whose theories...”)译为中文短句(“因其关于... 的理论”),符合中文表达习惯;英文直接引语(如爱因斯坦的话)保留口语化风格,“modestly said” 译为 “谦逊地表示”,传达人物态度。
- 术语准确:“energy equals mass times the speed of light squared” 译为 “能量等于质量乘以光速的平方”,物理学公式 “E=mc²” 直接保留,确保科学性;“atomic energy and weapons” 译为 “原子能与核武器”,语义准确无歧义。
- 文化背景补充:“Person of the Century” 译为 “世纪人物”,无需额外解释(中文读者可理解其为《时代》杂志的重要评选);“new relativism” 译为 “新相对主义”,符合哲学领域中文表达。
三、写作(Part III Writing,30%)
题目:Should Schools and Universities be Commercialized(学校应否商业化)
写作要求
- 篇幅约 300 词,需包含 “论点陈述(第一段)、细节支撑(第二段)、总结结尾(第三段)”。
- 需关注结构、词汇多样性与用词准确性,讨论 “校园盈利现象” 的观点。
参考范文
Should Schools and Universities be Commercialized
Schools and universities should not be overly commercialized, as education’s core mission—nurturing people and pursuing truth—conflicts with the profit-driven nature of commercialization. While moderate resource raising may support school operations, excessive commercialization will distort education’s essence and harm students’ interests.
Over-commercialization brings two major harms. First, it undermines education equity. Many schools charge exorbitant fees for construction, dormitories, and even bicycle parking, which places a heavy burden on low-income families. For example, some technical schools set boarding fees far beyond the affordability of ordinary families, forcing promising students to drop out. Second, it distracts schools from their educational focus. When schools prioritize profit, they may cut funding for essential courses (such as humanities) and invest more in profitable programs, leading to an unbalanced curriculum. Moreover, improper fee collection damages the sacred image of education, eroding public trust in schools and teachers.
In conclusion, education should remain a public good rather than a profit-making tool. Schools and universities should focus on improving teaching quality and student welfare, while funding should come from government support and standardized donations instead of excessive fees. Only by resisting over-commercialization can education fulfill its role of shaping responsible citizens and promoting social progress.
解析
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结构清晰:
- 第一段:明确论点 “学校不应过度商业化,教育使命与盈利本质冲突”,兼顾 “适度筹资可支持运营” 的客观情况,避免绝对化。
- 第二段:从 “教育公平”(高额费用加重低收入家庭负担)和 “教育重心偏离”(削减基础课程、损害教育公信力)两个维度展开,结合 “职业学校高额住宿费” 的实例,增强说服力。
- 第三段:总结 “教育应是公共产品”,提出 “政府支持 + 规范捐赠” 的解决方案,呼应开篇论点,形成闭环。
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词汇与句式:
- 词汇多样性:使用 “overly commercialized”“profit-driven”“exorbitant fees”“unbalanced curriculum” 等精准表达,避免重复;
- 句式灵活:结合让步状语从句(While moderate...)、举例(For example...)、条件句(Only by...can...),增强文章层次感。
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贴合要求:
- 紧扣题目 “校园盈利现象”,未偏离主题;
- 篇幅约 300 词,符合字数要求;
- 观点明确,逻辑连贯,符合考研英语写作的 “论点 - 论据 - 结论” 标准结构。
四、备考建议
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词汇积累:聚焦语境与搭配:通过考博信息网(
http://www.kaoboinfo.com/)获取真题高频词汇,重点记忆 “一词多义”(如 tender 作 “提出” 或 “嫩的”)和固定搭配(如 dissipate heat “散热”、sanctify a place “使某地神圣化”),结合真题例句理解用法,避免孤立背词。
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阅读训练:定位题干与原文关联:针对篇章阅读,练习 “题干关键词定位原文” 的技巧(如 17 题 “primary concern” 对应原文 “指出提议缺陷” 的核心),同时关注 “转折词(however)、例证词(for example)” 后的关键信息,提升答题效率;对于类比推理题,总结 “个体 - 集体”“工具 - 对象”“动作 - 目的” 等常见逻辑关系,形成解题思路。
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翻译提升:兼顾准确与流畅:汉译英需注意 “专有名词规范”(如 “世界妇女大会” 官方译名)和 “句式拆分”;英译汉需关注 “术语准确”(如相对论相关术语)和 “中文表达习惯”(避免直译导致的生硬),可参考真题答案详解中的翻译技巧,积累常见句型。
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写作练习:强化结构与论证:按照 “论点 - 论据 - 结论” 结构练习,每段开头用 “主题句” 明确核心,论据部分结合 “实例”(如校园商业化中的 “高额住宿费”)或 “数据” 增强说服力;同时积累 “教育公平”“商业化” 相关话题词汇(如 education equity、profit-making tool),避免写作时词汇匮乏。